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The New Character

He smiles at me
This mysterious man of mine
He is saddened
He is lost, I imagine him in my mind

My heart skips a beat
As I write, between the pages
Crafting his look,
His thoughts, what he says

And as I continue writing
I see him smile as he
Turns around and brick walls
Disappear between us

He understands me and I understand him
We create this piece together
As I whisper in the words
I love you -- new character of mine

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Why I write - the creation of a new character in a novel
Catching the moment I have started writing about him and why I write and what happens.

This level of passion is required to create an authentic character.

But watch out ---- what happens here if he is the devil in disguise - those characters people love to hate???? You get the opposite.

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:iconvalasedai:
^ValaSedai May 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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~tinaaw May 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for the feature. Much appreciated on this poem about writing and characters.
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:iconlovelyrangel:
For some reason, I can't describe this poem other than really cute. I love it!
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:iconrealartizt:
Mood: Love =realARTIZT Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
haha this is something that happens to me ALL the time...my flights of fancy make me wish life could be given to a sketch or storybook character and not only living and breathing here in my mind.
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Mood: Love *dwkeiko Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yes!!! I agree, write for the characters! :3
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*GentlemanAnachronism Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This, I really really like. It's not exactly how characters happen with me - is more they turn up and start telling me I'm writing them wrong and they're moving in to make sure I get them right in future - but it's close enough that it rings very very true. Very nice piece.
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~tinaaw Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I am currently writing a book with many characters - doing this. Coming into the book - going back out, coming back in.

Thanks for the comment.
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Mood: Happy Tears ~ZachValkyrie Jan 2, 2013  Student Writer
Truer words were never written!
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~tinaaw Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks - I am enjoying writing about him.
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~ZachValkyrie Jan 2, 2013  Student Writer
I'll be watching!
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